Pirate Mike Loves Baseball!

Another early one I’ve redrawn. With this one, I also changed the punch line. It used to “At least he’s not a Cubs fan.” Being that I’m a White Sox fan, I take great joy in the Cubs losing. But now Bonnie’s punchline here is probably too harsh. I used it anyway, because I figured it would be interesting to see how it played. I was hoping it would play more along the lines of Mike needing to be more thoughtful about his marriage (as he should be about everything, not just his marriage), but I think people take it to be much more grim than I intended it. So I probably need another rewrite here!

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